THE toughest challenge to get into Harvard University in the United States is writing the personal statement essay.
This requirement had kept Yang di-Pertuan Agong Scholarship (BYDPA) 2023 awardee Thenesh Anbalagan awake countless nights as he worked hard on his application.
But his effort has paid off as the 25-year-old, who was among 11 students of higher learning institutions conferred the BYDPA at Istana Negara last month, will be pursuing the Master of Laws (LL.M) degree at the Ivy League university in Cambridge, Massachusetts, soon.
Thenesh is only one of 180 individuals worldwide accepted into the programme at Harvard this year.
“The personal statement essay comprises two sections.
“In the first part, you will have to describe an important issue in your field or a current legal problem in a specific country or region, and propose a solution.
“The second part requires you to elaborate on your reasons for wanting to study at Harvard, and how it connects with your past experiences and future plans,” he told StarEdu.
In his application essay, the Muarian focused on his vision for the country and how pursuing a master’s degree at Harvard would enable him to contribute significantly to achieving that vision.
“I highlighted how the programme’s resources and learning environment align with my goals, and I explained how I plan to leverage those opportunities to make a positive impact.
“I believe the admissions committee would value genuine and sincere narratives that reflect the applicants’ passion and aspirations,” he said, stressing the need for early preparation to make one’s essay impactful.
Exploring the world in secondary school, college or university can provide valuable experiences and perspectives to draw upon, he added.
And by gaining diverse insights, candidates can enhance their essays, demonstrate their readiness for the programme, and make their applications stand out.
“When your actions and statements are rooted in authenticity, your application essay will shine with purpose, leaving a lasting impact on your journey.
“A purpose-driven approach not only propels you towards greatness, but also inspires others around you.
“Find your purpose, and let it be the guiding light that leads you to exceptional achievements and a truly inspirational path,” he advised.
Recalling his years growing up in Muar, a town in Johor, Thenesh said Harvard seemed like a distant dream.
And when his father, a secondary school teacher, passed away during his Sijil Pelajaran Malaysia (SPM) exams, the then 17-year-old saw his ambition move even further out of reach.
“He left us just hours before I was to sit for the Add Maths paper. It was just my mum and me from there on,” he said.
Digging deep, Thenesh persevered and was accepted to study at the Pahang Matriculation College.
He then applied to read law at Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia (UKM) but was rejected. He reapplied and was finally accepted but faced another rejection when his Tunku Abdul Rahman Foundation Undergraduate Scholarship application to study at UKM was unsuccessful.
Refusing to give up, he reapplied and was awarded the scholarship this time around.
Upon graduation, Thenesh revisited his Harvard dream.
“Good opportunities and exposure were scarce in a small town like Muar. Harvard felt like an elusive castle in the clouds, reserved only for the privileged few.
“But deep within my heart, there was this unshakeable conviction that I could make the impossible possible.
“Life has a way of humbling you. It can break you over and over again but that is no reason for you to stay down. I refused to let my background, environment or financial situation defeat me,” he said.
Thenesh, who will begin his studies at Harvard on Aug 15, hopes to become a legal expert who is able to offer valuable counsel to the nation upon his return from the US.
“I hope to make a lasting impact in the Malaysian legal landscape, particularly in the field of international law, guiding the country through global challenges.
“I want to engage with international organisations, advocate for our country’s interests, and contribute to the education of international law by leveraging Harvard’s vast resources and expertise to conduct meaningful research and to explore innovative legal solutions.”Tips for standing out
Advising Harvard hopefuls to be specific about their vision, goals and plans, to show impact, and to ask someone they trust to review and provide feedback on their personal statement essays, Thenesh Anbalagan, who will begin his studies at the Ivy League institution on Aug 15, has these pointers to share:Early preparation is key
While still in secondary school or college, embrace a well-rounded approach by exploring the world, excelling at both academic and extracurricular pursuits, and seeking personal growth.
Hook and reel
Craft a compelling and impactful essay that captivates the readers so that they will invest in offering you a seat at their Ivy League school. Share your unique story, passion and aspirations to showcase why you are an exceptional and valuable candidate.
Have good referees
Get referees who know you well and can highlight their experiences with you. Their insights will add coherence to your essay, reinforcing your outstanding qualities and contributions.
Be curious
Foster a mindset of continuous exploration and learning, keeping yourself up to date with current affairs to gain a broader perspective on various issues. This can provide valuable insights for addressing real-world problems and demonstrate your commitment to making a meaningful impact.
Have a purpose
Embrace a profound sense of purpose as you pursue your dream of enrolling in an Ivy League school or excelling academically and at extracurricular activities. Let your motivations go beyond mere trophies and curriculum vitae enhancement. Discover your genuine passion and calling, and let it be the driving force behind your pursuit of excellence.
